The Third Chapter of My Book
08 June 2013
Alright guys, here is the third chapter of Royal. This will possibly be the last chapter I upload (for a while at least,) so be sure to leave all your thoughts and opinions in the comments below! Honest feedback is entirely essential for a writer's success. If you haven't read the first or second you can check those out by clicking on the links. I hope you enjoy!
“Chestnut
curls for hair
Beautiful
olive skin
Hazel
eyes full of care
A
delightfully boyish grin
A
skeptic is vulnerability
Denial
is his plight
Goodness
ignored willingly
Truth
and love will fight
Though
deception may hold
Reconciliation
wins in the end
As
nobility grows bold
So
past wounds will mend”
Years passed. Bodies grew. Thoughts changed. And heart’s molded
according to new discoveries. Yet loyalties remained the same, as did Roldan’s
wishes expressed on that winter night six years ago. Harry was growing, though
less in mind and more in bearing. He had already passed his mother, and yearned
for the day when he might tower over his father, or at least look level into
his eyes instead of up at them. The prince took joy in little, and showed
interest in next to nothing. The only thing that thrilled him, or made his eyes
light up at its mention, was fencing.
Early
on, his teacher expressed with joy and marvel that he had never seen such
talent and eagerness in a student. His punctuality in arriving for lessons
could not have been better, and to him the sport was most exhilarating when his
body grew weak. As his muscles painfully protested, and his shirt drenched with
sweat clung to his chest, all else could be forgotten. The feeling of immediate
power and complete control, could not be experienced anywhere else. Meals,
clothes, studies, manners, socialization, were all dictated according to the
propriety of someone else’s better opinion.
Often
when fencing, his boots shuffling along the muddy grass as he dodged his
partner or teacher, Harold pondered how his parents could demand that he take
pride in his position, and ascertain its importance, while at the same time
expect him to abide by the rules and advice of scholars and advisors lower than
himself.
People’s expectations were ridiculous.
Roldan had told him for as long as he could remember, “‘There is
no young man in this kingdom with the potential or opportunity to wield as much
power and influence as you. You were born to privilege and the ability to
change. Recognize that. Study that. And above all…do not forget it.’” As a
young and skeptical step-son, upon first hearing, Harry had actually smiled at
the speech, feeling it to be the only loving and synonymously reasonable thing
to ever escape his step-father’s lips.
Though
now recalling the words, he shivered with dread.
The things since heard and
observed, clothed Roldan’s edict in contemptible hypocrisy. For on many other
occasions when he believed Harry to be getting too ahead of himself, Roldan
would whisper, “‘Son, do not allow your royalty to determine your identity…that
is despicable above all else.’”
Harry plunged his sword into the mud. He always loved the way it
wobbled whenever he released his hand.
His quarrel was not so much with the speeches but rather the
speaker. For years his mother begged him to try and return her husband’s
attempts of affection, but he did not blame her. Perhaps she didn’t know. They
had not even been married ten years, and living in a castle she could not be
expected to know about everything said and done under its roof. With a grunt
and a sigh he pulled off his white gloves and shoved them into one pocket,
running a hand through his sweaty curls. Looking towards the sunset, he settled
down upon the grass, admiring the shades of yellow and orange that reminded him
of a diminishing flame, while the pastel purple and pink hues beamed
translucently against the sky like thin brushstrokes.
“Mind if I join you?”
He gasped with a start, and looking behind him to find Roldan smiling
down he turned to face the scene without offering an answer. The king was by no
means unused to this sort of response, yet the pain of a burn does not decrease
with quantity. Silently too he sat beside his son, and for a time neither said
a word while they both admired nature’s daily miracle taking place before them.
“Beautiful isn’t it?”
Harry’s gaze faltered, and he plucked a blade of grass from near
his boot, meticulously pulling away strands and threads little at a time.
“You’re getting good.” Roldan continued, gesturing towards his sword.
“I ought to be by now.”
“You enjoy fencing?”
The prince raised one eyebrow. “No, not at all. I take pleasure in the unfulfilling.”
Roldan’s mouth twitched in spite of himself. “Well I’m glad
because there is an invitation for you, in regards to a fencing tournament.”
“What? Where?”
Roldan pulled a note out from his pocket and handed it to Harry.
It only took a minute for his eager eyes to comprehend the words. Yet he handed
it back with a skeptical brow.
“Competing for a kiss wouldn’t bother me if the lips did not
belong to the Princess of Zadith.”
The king slowly nodded, gently folding the piece of paper. “I can
understand your hesitation. I know Alavare and Zadith have never been friendly,
but for the past several years we have managed to separately reside in peace.”
“It is not that I dislike the Zadithians.”
“Then what is your reluctance?”
Harry rose to his feet, and with blank eyes and condemning mouth
he stared at Roldan through the little light provided by traces of the setting
sun. “Princess Heloise.” He rolled
the name off of his tongue with a hiss. “Do you think either of us has
forgotten? No, it would be awkward enough fighting before her in the first
place, let alone for her lips…and we both know whose fault that is.”
Roldan stood too with a light laugh and the prince stooped a little
under his authoritative gaze. “You would blame me for the feelings produced due
to my coaxing? Come now.”
“You did more than coax.” Harry mumbled, dropping his eyes that he
might not endure his father’s. “Twice you forced us to meet and discuss our prospective
marriage. I did not want to, she did not want to, mother did not want to…and
yet you.” He bit his lip and lifted
his face when a cool breeze refreshed him. “Against everyone’s objections you
tried to make it happen.”
“Yes…” the king admitted, pushing his tongue against the inside of
his cheek. “And when I saw that my efforts were fruitless and you were adamant
about your disinclination, I relented.”
“But that doesn’t change what you did before. We didn’t want to
see each other in the first place, and a voluntary meeting would be just
uncomfortable…thanks to you.”
Roldan said little to avoid shortness and consequent insult upon
insult. “I’m sorry you feel that way. You won’t be attending then?”
Harry held out a hand while still staring at the ground and Roldan
handed him the invitation again. This time he thoughtfully read it and replied
with a sorry sigh, “Frankly, I don’t see the point.”
“You would be performing for many people, it could lead to further
public matches in the future. You’d like that wouldn’t you?”
The prince shrugged. “Yes, but I think there are other better
possibilities for a first match.” He turned to go, dragging his feet along the
ground.
“There is just one more thing I think you should know!” Roldan
called out. Harry turned his head to the side. “You would be fighting against
Sir Lyle.”
Harold wheeled round revealing wide eyes and an open mouth. After
a moment he regained consciousness, batting his eyes in amazement and blowing
out his cheeks. “You mean that kid I used to hang out with all the time who all
the women inexplicably swooned over?”
Roldan laughed and pointed a finger. “That’s the fellow. Though I
would hardly call him a kid; he is five years older than you.”
“Five years? Now not only is the match ridiculous it is unfair!
How could they expect me to compete with him?”
“It is a compliment to you. They know your skill level is equal if
not greater than his.” Harry smiled to himself, revealing his dimples rarely
seen. “But you speak as if you do not like him.”
The lad scoffed. “Oh I suppose he isn’t very irritating other than his vanity and constant need to prove
his superiority in looks, talent and strength.”
“Well I don’t know…I rather like him.”
“Ugh, all the adults do. He stores up smooth speeches in the ears
of those whose favor will win him some kind of reward in the future. To
everyone else, his words are insolent and flat at best.”
Roldan slowly walked forward, laying a hand on Harry’s shoulder.
“Maybe I do not know Sir Lyle like you do but I know one thing…you could beat
him. Easily.”
Harry squared his shoulders with shining eyes and turned around,
confidently striding towards the castle under a starlit sky. “You may send my
acceptance of the invitation.”
Prince Harold
rode forth into the Zadith Castle courtyard, his family along with a slew of
Alavare citizens following close behind. Lush gardens grew where stones had not
been laid while the late morning summer sun bounced off flowers and shrouded
the royals in a heavenly glow. A servant walked forward to attend his horse and
assist him off, but Harry scoffed and slid off the steed, striding forth. King
Brandon and his daughter Princess Heloise sat on their plush high backed chairs
as servants stood by offering food, refilling their goblets and holding parasols
behind their heads. With
a sigh Harry approached them, knowing manners ordered a proper greeting. King
Roldan walked beside his son, and when Harry saw him out of the corner of his
eye he hastened his footsteps and bowed accordingly before his father could.
“Your majesty.”
He mumbled. And as custom he kissed the princess’ hand muttering, “Your highness.”
She nodded with vacant eyes, and their equally blank expressions communicated
the mutual desire to converse as little as possible. Although when Harry took a
step back, he unashamedly examined her face to see if it was much altered since
he saw her two years before.
He understood why
others called her beautiful, though he himself had always found her indifferent
blue eyes and long nose forbidding. King and King merely greeted one another
with a courtly bow; since that night six years ago they could hardly speak to
one another.
Harry
turned around walking towards the center courtyard as citizens from both
kingdoms gathered on opposite sides to watch and root for their competitor. The
Prince looked up at the sky with one eye closed, pulling off his scratchy over
coat and running his fingers through his hair. Suddenly, someone emerged from
the crowd opposite him, and Harry suppressed a gag when seeing his face.
Sir
Lyle smiled with all the charm and decorum of a perfect gentlemen, his taller
frame and better-formed muscles oozing self-professed dominance and mediocre
supremacy. He marched forth with a complacent sigh, his long sword swinging
through his belt loop and brushing the back of his boot with every step. Harold
held his ground, neither smiling nor frowning and shook the hand offered him.
“Good to see you
again Harry.” Lyle wore a taunting half-smile.
“That’s “his
highness” to you, Sir Lyle.” Sir Lyle
seemed a little surprised but recovered with a smile nodding,
“Right…may the
best man win your highness.” Both walked back in order to prepare before
starting the match. Each commenced with the usual warm-up exercises, Harry
cracking every joint he knew how and Lyle waving his sword in fantastic motions
to “loosen his shoulders.” Queen Jolenta
embraced her young son before he left. Roldan merely nodded with approval while
Evangeline, only four years old at the time rushed forward hugging his legs.
Harry gave her one pat before attempting to shake her off as she called in her
sweet angelic voice, “Good luck Harry!” and she proceeded to threaten Sir Lyle
by waving her pudgy fist.
The arbitrator walked
towards the center courtyard, motioning for each opponent to join him. A
reverent hush fell over the crowd. “Welcome, ladies and gentlemen, to the first
fencing tournament between Alavare and Zadith.” The applause and cheers rang as
a monotony of buzzing bees in Harry’s ears as all attention remained intent
upon the task before him. “The competitors have a choice concerning whether
they shall fight only one match, or whether two out of three victories will
determine a winner.” When eyes fell upon him, Harry shrugged and absently
replied,
“I think one is
enough.”
Sir Lyle smirked
and mumbled beneath the hearing of the crowd, “Do you really tire so easily?”
Harry’s nostrils flared and his eyes gleamed with fury, but he determined not
to give him the satisfaction.
“Two out of three
it is.” He announced.
“Very well then.”
The arbitrator smiled, stepping back.
“Gentlemen, ready
your swords.”
Both obeyed and
leaned on their back leg, as an animal preparing to devour their victim. Harry
fixed his hazel eyes intently upon Lyle’s gaze, blocking out all other sounds
and thoughts. For the first time that day he was able to relax, reminded of why
he enjoyed fencing so much. All other cares and duties were not simply ignored
but altogether forgotten, and every fiber of energy was focused on one task.
Sir Lyle smiled to himself, confident in his own abilities and he flashed the
crowd one last winning smile before the arbitrator crowed,
“Fight!”
Harry
held up his sword as Lyle bounded forward, blocking his repeated attacks with
the dexterity of a dedicated learner. When the prince repeatedly met his endeavors
with careless counters, Lyle’s brow furrowed in concentration when he realized
he did not fight a kid, but a worthy opponent. Harry too, recognized his own
ability and readily cast off all hesitation, fearlessly administering plays and
attacks. Crashing swords, shuffling shoes and grunts of determination echoed in
the open air. When the match continued to drag, Sir Lyle lunged forward with the
ferocity of a lion while Harry twisted and ducked to avoid the blade. Only one
injury counted the match won, but both struggled to inflict a single scratch.
While the prince easily avoided Lyle’s plays, striking him seemed nearly
impossible.
Taking
a deep breath and blinking sweat out of his eyes, Harry connected with that
serenity he knew and loved so well, thinking only of the game, refusing to
worry over possible results. Sir Lyle smiled to himself as he assumed his
opponent growing weak, and the prince recognized mockery in his blue eyes.
Biting his lip Harry waited for Lyle’s next move, and when Lyle sliced his
sword sideways Harry rolled under his raised arm, slid behind his legs, cutting
his sword across his back. Lyle hissed with pain and lifted his sword to
counter with an attack but the arbitrator rushed forward, helping Harry to his
feet, announcing Alavare’s victory.
The prince hardly smiled but silently returned to his side
for a respite. Zadith citizens “awwed’ in sympathy when Sir Lyle pulled off his
shirt to reveal a thin gash across his lower back, droplets of blood dripping
down. Harry ignored his family’s congratulations and merely accepted a drink of
water
He would
not allow premature victory to shroud his judgment during the next match. As
noon approached, mellow sunlight shifted into unbearable heat, causing the
citizens to take up their camp beneath trees while Harry and Lyle tied their
shirts around their waist, wiping sweat from their brow. The prince shook all
moisture from his curls before assuming position for the next match. “Fight!”
Cried the arbitrator and the competitors sprung forward with grinding teeth,
holding nothing back.
Princess Heloise held a hand to her
mouth and gripped her skirts in suspense, wondering if Harry fought so
violently for her. King Brandon remained solemn, refusing to allow his face to
betray inner anxiety. Little Evangeline held tight to her mother though she
watched with eager eyes, sure of her brother’s ability. Roldan saw it all with
silent pride. Doubt never entered his mind.
Harry saw only
the two swords, as he spun on his heels and twisted his arms without relent.
Sir Lyle attempted to contain his struggle, yet the growing fear in his eyes
could not be hidden. However it cannot be denied that both gradually grew weary
as they seemed content to fight in only one small area of the vast courtyard.
Eventually, over-used moves became familiar and tactics were countered without
thought. For a moment Harry threw his sword into his left hand when his right
arm could bear the pain no longer, but Lyle leapt forward ready to devour the
weakness and Harry quickly switched back. Without
words both paused, taking a moment to catch their breath. The sun beat down
upon their bare backs and the absence of any covering made it difficult to see.
Slowly, both rose to their full height and when they ran forward, one sword
pressing against the other, held steady between their faces, Harry could see
Lyle was not very much taller than him after all.
They
remained there for a moment, their heavy breathing like snorts of a dragon.
“You just want to kiss her don’t you?” Lyle whispered with a sneer. The prince
squinted his eyes, and lifting one foot pushed Sir Lyle to the ground, and
holding him down with one arm he used his sword to make a swift dash at his
chest. Harold closed his eyes and staggered back on his feet, holding his sore
arm. Alavare citizens roared applause when Harry was announced victorious and
Sir Lyle struggled to his feet, blood dripping down his front.
Though his knees
wobbled, and he felt sure his arm might fall off, Prince Harold offered a hand
nonetheless, which Lyle refused with a contemptuous scoff. He stormed back to
his side throwing his sword upon the ground and he vanished among the crowd.
Harry remained standing as the arbitrator announced, “Victory for Alavare!” The
prince received the congratulations with a weak smile, and when the clapping
ceased, the arbitrator continued, “You know where your reward lies.”
He turned towards
where the princess sat, and she stood to bestow his prize. Harry slowly walked
forward, none too eager yet neither reluctant. Though he was fifteen and she
seventeen, they stood the same height. For a moment neither budged, Heloise
staring with her blank blue eyes.
King Brandon turned his gaze to the other
side as though he could not bear to look, and when Harry's eyes met with Roldan's he received a nod of encouragement. Sunlight reflected off her platinum
blonde hair, the jewels in her tiara glistening like the ocean on a summer
night. When Harry did not move for several moments, the citizens began to
snicker and the princess glanced nervously from side to side as if to say “get
on with it!” Harold took a step forward, then instead of lifting his lips to
hers he quickly took her hand in his and kissed the back of her palm. As he
stormed through the crowd people shouted, “You’re not supposed to kiss her like
that boy!” However Heloise did not
seem ungrateful. Surprised yes, but she received this gracious alterative with
secret joy. Ignoring the questions of his sister and mother the prince mounted
his horse, and gave his father one last withering glare before riding on.
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The Third Chapter of My Book
Alright guys, here is the third chapter of Royal. This will possibly be the last chapter I upload (for a while at least,) so be sure to leave all your thoughts and opinions in the comments below! Honest feedback is entirely essential for a writer's success. If you haven't read the first or second you can check those out by clicking on the links. I hope you enjoy!
“Chestnut
curls for hair
Beautiful
olive skin
Hazel
eyes full of care
A
delightfully boyish grin
A
skeptic is vulnerability
Denial
is his plight
Goodness
ignored willingly
Truth
and love will fight
Though
deception may hold
Reconciliation
wins in the end
As
nobility grows bold
So
past wounds will mend”
Years passed. Bodies grew. Thoughts changed. And heart’s molded
according to new discoveries. Yet loyalties remained the same, as did Roldan’s
wishes expressed on that winter night six years ago. Harry was growing, though
less in mind and more in bearing. He had already passed his mother, and yearned
for the day when he might tower over his father, or at least look level into
his eyes instead of up at them. The prince took joy in little, and showed
interest in next to nothing. The only thing that thrilled him, or made his eyes
light up at its mention, was fencing.
Early
on, his teacher expressed with joy and marvel that he had never seen such
talent and eagerness in a student. His punctuality in arriving for lessons
could not have been better, and to him the sport was most exhilarating when his
body grew weak. As his muscles painfully protested, and his shirt drenched with
sweat clung to his chest, all else could be forgotten. The feeling of immediate
power and complete control, could not be experienced anywhere else. Meals,
clothes, studies, manners, socialization, were all dictated according to the
propriety of someone else’s better opinion.
Often
when fencing, his boots shuffling along the muddy grass as he dodged his
partner or teacher, Harold pondered how his parents could demand that he take
pride in his position, and ascertain its importance, while at the same time
expect him to abide by the rules and advice of scholars and advisors lower than
himself.
People’s expectations were ridiculous.
Roldan had told him for as long as he could remember, “‘There is
no young man in this kingdom with the potential or opportunity to wield as much
power and influence as you. You were born to privilege and the ability to
change. Recognize that. Study that. And above all…do not forget it.’” As a
young and skeptical step-son, upon first hearing, Harry had actually smiled at
the speech, feeling it to be the only loving and synonymously reasonable thing
to ever escape his step-father’s lips.
Though
now recalling the words, he shivered with dread.
The things since heard and
observed, clothed Roldan’s edict in contemptible hypocrisy. For on many other
occasions when he believed Harry to be getting too ahead of himself, Roldan
would whisper, “‘Son, do not allow your royalty to determine your identity…that
is despicable above all else.’”
Harry plunged his sword into the mud. He always loved the way it
wobbled whenever he released his hand.
His quarrel was not so much with the speeches but rather the
speaker. For years his mother begged him to try and return her husband’s
attempts of affection, but he did not blame her. Perhaps she didn’t know. They
had not even been married ten years, and living in a castle she could not be
expected to know about everything said and done under its roof. With a grunt
and a sigh he pulled off his white gloves and shoved them into one pocket,
running a hand through his sweaty curls. Looking towards the sunset, he settled
down upon the grass, admiring the shades of yellow and orange that reminded him
of a diminishing flame, while the pastel purple and pink hues beamed
translucently against the sky like thin brushstrokes.
“Mind if I join you?”
He gasped with a start, and looking behind him to find Roldan smiling
down he turned to face the scene without offering an answer. The king was by no
means unused to this sort of response, yet the pain of a burn does not decrease
with quantity. Silently too he sat beside his son, and for a time neither said
a word while they both admired nature’s daily miracle taking place before them.
“Beautiful isn’t it?”
Harry’s gaze faltered, and he plucked a blade of grass from near
his boot, meticulously pulling away strands and threads little at a time.
“You’re getting good.” Roldan continued, gesturing towards his sword.
“I ought to be by now.”
“You enjoy fencing?”
The prince raised one eyebrow. “No, not at all. I take pleasure in the unfulfilling.”
Roldan’s mouth twitched in spite of himself. “Well I’m glad
because there is an invitation for you, in regards to a fencing tournament.”
“What? Where?”
Roldan pulled a note out from his pocket and handed it to Harry.
It only took a minute for his eager eyes to comprehend the words. Yet he handed
it back with a skeptical brow.
“Competing for a kiss wouldn’t bother me if the lips did not
belong to the Princess of Zadith.”
The king slowly nodded, gently folding the piece of paper. “I can
understand your hesitation. I know Alavare and Zadith have never been friendly,
but for the past several years we have managed to separately reside in peace.”
“It is not that I dislike the Zadithians.”
“Then what is your reluctance?”
Harry rose to his feet, and with blank eyes and condemning mouth
he stared at Roldan through the little light provided by traces of the setting
sun. “Princess Heloise.” He rolled
the name off of his tongue with a hiss. “Do you think either of us has
forgotten? No, it would be awkward enough fighting before her in the first
place, let alone for her lips…and we both know whose fault that is.”
Roldan stood too with a light laugh and the prince stooped a little
under his authoritative gaze. “You would blame me for the feelings produced due
to my coaxing? Come now.”
“You did more than coax.” Harry mumbled, dropping his eyes that he
might not endure his father’s. “Twice you forced us to meet and discuss our prospective
marriage. I did not want to, she did not want to, mother did not want to…and
yet you.” He bit his lip and lifted
his face when a cool breeze refreshed him. “Against everyone’s objections you
tried to make it happen.”
“Yes…” the king admitted, pushing his tongue against the inside of
his cheek. “And when I saw that my efforts were fruitless and you were adamant
about your disinclination, I relented.”
“But that doesn’t change what you did before. We didn’t want to
see each other in the first place, and a voluntary meeting would be just
uncomfortable…thanks to you.”
Roldan said little to avoid shortness and consequent insult upon
insult. “I’m sorry you feel that way. You won’t be attending then?”
Harry held out a hand while still staring at the ground and Roldan
handed him the invitation again. This time he thoughtfully read it and replied
with a sorry sigh, “Frankly, I don’t see the point.”
“You would be performing for many people, it could lead to further
public matches in the future. You’d like that wouldn’t you?”
The prince shrugged. “Yes, but I think there are other better
possibilities for a first match.” He turned to go, dragging his feet along the
ground.
“There is just one more thing I think you should know!” Roldan
called out. Harry turned his head to the side. “You would be fighting against
Sir Lyle.”
Harold wheeled round revealing wide eyes and an open mouth. After
a moment he regained consciousness, batting his eyes in amazement and blowing
out his cheeks. “You mean that kid I used to hang out with all the time who all
the women inexplicably swooned over?”
Roldan laughed and pointed a finger. “That’s the fellow. Though I
would hardly call him a kid; he is five years older than you.”
“Five years? Now not only is the match ridiculous it is unfair!
How could they expect me to compete with him?”
“It is a compliment to you. They know your skill level is equal if
not greater than his.” Harry smiled to himself, revealing his dimples rarely
seen. “But you speak as if you do not like him.”
The lad scoffed. “Oh I suppose he isn’t very irritating other than his vanity and constant need to prove
his superiority in looks, talent and strength.”
“Well I don’t know…I rather like him.”
“Ugh, all the adults do. He stores up smooth speeches in the ears
of those whose favor will win him some kind of reward in the future. To
everyone else, his words are insolent and flat at best.”
Roldan slowly walked forward, laying a hand on Harry’s shoulder.
“Maybe I do not know Sir Lyle like you do but I know one thing…you could beat
him. Easily.”
Harry squared his shoulders with shining eyes and turned around,
confidently striding towards the castle under a starlit sky. “You may send my
acceptance of the invitation.”
Prince Harold
rode forth into the Zadith Castle courtyard, his family along with a slew of
Alavare citizens following close behind. Lush gardens grew where stones had not
been laid while the late morning summer sun bounced off flowers and shrouded
the royals in a heavenly glow. A servant walked forward to attend his horse and
assist him off, but Harry scoffed and slid off the steed, striding forth. King
Brandon and his daughter Princess Heloise sat on their plush high backed chairs
as servants stood by offering food, refilling their goblets and holding parasols
behind their heads. With
a sigh Harry approached them, knowing manners ordered a proper greeting. King
Roldan walked beside his son, and when Harry saw him out of the corner of his
eye he hastened his footsteps and bowed accordingly before his father could.
“Your majesty.”
He mumbled. And as custom he kissed the princess’ hand muttering, “Your highness.”
She nodded with vacant eyes, and their equally blank expressions communicated
the mutual desire to converse as little as possible. Although when Harry took a
step back, he unashamedly examined her face to see if it was much altered since
he saw her two years before.
He understood why
others called her beautiful, though he himself had always found her indifferent
blue eyes and long nose forbidding. King and King merely greeted one another
with a courtly bow; since that night six years ago they could hardly speak to
one another.
Harry
turned around walking towards the center courtyard as citizens from both
kingdoms gathered on opposite sides to watch and root for their competitor. The
Prince looked up at the sky with one eye closed, pulling off his scratchy over
coat and running his fingers through his hair. Suddenly, someone emerged from
the crowd opposite him, and Harry suppressed a gag when seeing his face.
Sir
Lyle smiled with all the charm and decorum of a perfect gentlemen, his taller
frame and better-formed muscles oozing self-professed dominance and mediocre
supremacy. He marched forth with a complacent sigh, his long sword swinging
through his belt loop and brushing the back of his boot with every step. Harold
held his ground, neither smiling nor frowning and shook the hand offered him.
“Good to see you
again Harry.” Lyle wore a taunting half-smile.
“That’s “his
highness” to you, Sir Lyle.” Sir Lyle
seemed a little surprised but recovered with a smile nodding,
“Right…may the
best man win your highness.” Both walked back in order to prepare before
starting the match. Each commenced with the usual warm-up exercises, Harry
cracking every joint he knew how and Lyle waving his sword in fantastic motions
to “loosen his shoulders.” Queen Jolenta
embraced her young son before he left. Roldan merely nodded with approval while
Evangeline, only four years old at the time rushed forward hugging his legs.
Harry gave her one pat before attempting to shake her off as she called in her
sweet angelic voice, “Good luck Harry!” and she proceeded to threaten Sir Lyle
by waving her pudgy fist.
The arbitrator walked
towards the center courtyard, motioning for each opponent to join him. A
reverent hush fell over the crowd. “Welcome, ladies and gentlemen, to the first
fencing tournament between Alavare and Zadith.” The applause and cheers rang as
a monotony of buzzing bees in Harry’s ears as all attention remained intent
upon the task before him. “The competitors have a choice concerning whether
they shall fight only one match, or whether two out of three victories will
determine a winner.” When eyes fell upon him, Harry shrugged and absently
replied,
“I think one is
enough.”
Sir Lyle smirked
and mumbled beneath the hearing of the crowd, “Do you really tire so easily?”
Harry’s nostrils flared and his eyes gleamed with fury, but he determined not
to give him the satisfaction.
“Two out of three
it is.” He announced.
“Very well then.”
The arbitrator smiled, stepping back.
“Gentlemen, ready
your swords.”
Both obeyed and
leaned on their back leg, as an animal preparing to devour their victim. Harry
fixed his hazel eyes intently upon Lyle’s gaze, blocking out all other sounds
and thoughts. For the first time that day he was able to relax, reminded of why
he enjoyed fencing so much. All other cares and duties were not simply ignored
but altogether forgotten, and every fiber of energy was focused on one task.
Sir Lyle smiled to himself, confident in his own abilities and he flashed the
crowd one last winning smile before the arbitrator crowed,
“Fight!”
Harry
held up his sword as Lyle bounded forward, blocking his repeated attacks with
the dexterity of a dedicated learner. When the prince repeatedly met his endeavors
with careless counters, Lyle’s brow furrowed in concentration when he realized
he did not fight a kid, but a worthy opponent. Harry too, recognized his own
ability and readily cast off all hesitation, fearlessly administering plays and
attacks. Crashing swords, shuffling shoes and grunts of determination echoed in
the open air. When the match continued to drag, Sir Lyle lunged forward with the
ferocity of a lion while Harry twisted and ducked to avoid the blade. Only one
injury counted the match won, but both struggled to inflict a single scratch.
While the prince easily avoided Lyle’s plays, striking him seemed nearly
impossible.
Taking
a deep breath and blinking sweat out of his eyes, Harry connected with that
serenity he knew and loved so well, thinking only of the game, refusing to
worry over possible results. Sir Lyle smiled to himself as he assumed his
opponent growing weak, and the prince recognized mockery in his blue eyes.
Biting his lip Harry waited for Lyle’s next move, and when Lyle sliced his
sword sideways Harry rolled under his raised arm, slid behind his legs, cutting
his sword across his back. Lyle hissed with pain and lifted his sword to
counter with an attack but the arbitrator rushed forward, helping Harry to his
feet, announcing Alavare’s victory.
The prince hardly smiled but silently returned to his side
for a respite. Zadith citizens “awwed’ in sympathy when Sir Lyle pulled off his
shirt to reveal a thin gash across his lower back, droplets of blood dripping
down. Harry ignored his family’s congratulations and merely accepted a drink of
water
He would
not allow premature victory to shroud his judgment during the next match. As
noon approached, mellow sunlight shifted into unbearable heat, causing the
citizens to take up their camp beneath trees while Harry and Lyle tied their
shirts around their waist, wiping sweat from their brow. The prince shook all
moisture from his curls before assuming position for the next match. “Fight!”
Cried the arbitrator and the competitors sprung forward with grinding teeth,
holding nothing back.
Princess Heloise held a hand to her
mouth and gripped her skirts in suspense, wondering if Harry fought so
violently for her. King Brandon remained solemn, refusing to allow his face to
betray inner anxiety. Little Evangeline held tight to her mother though she
watched with eager eyes, sure of her brother’s ability. Roldan saw it all with
silent pride. Doubt never entered his mind.
Harry saw only
the two swords, as he spun on his heels and twisted his arms without relent.
Sir Lyle attempted to contain his struggle, yet the growing fear in his eyes
could not be hidden. However it cannot be denied that both gradually grew weary
as they seemed content to fight in only one small area of the vast courtyard.
Eventually, over-used moves became familiar and tactics were countered without
thought. For a moment Harry threw his sword into his left hand when his right
arm could bear the pain no longer, but Lyle leapt forward ready to devour the
weakness and Harry quickly switched back. Without
words both paused, taking a moment to catch their breath. The sun beat down
upon their bare backs and the absence of any covering made it difficult to see.
Slowly, both rose to their full height and when they ran forward, one sword
pressing against the other, held steady between their faces, Harry could see
Lyle was not very much taller than him after all.
They
remained there for a moment, their heavy breathing like snorts of a dragon.
“You just want to kiss her don’t you?” Lyle whispered with a sneer. The prince
squinted his eyes, and lifting one foot pushed Sir Lyle to the ground, and
holding him down with one arm he used his sword to make a swift dash at his
chest. Harold closed his eyes and staggered back on his feet, holding his sore
arm. Alavare citizens roared applause when Harry was announced victorious and
Sir Lyle struggled to his feet, blood dripping down his front.
Though his knees
wobbled, and he felt sure his arm might fall off, Prince Harold offered a hand
nonetheless, which Lyle refused with a contemptuous scoff. He stormed back to
his side throwing his sword upon the ground and he vanished among the crowd.
Harry remained standing as the arbitrator announced, “Victory for Alavare!” The
prince received the congratulations with a weak smile, and when the clapping
ceased, the arbitrator continued, “You know where your reward lies.”
He turned towards
where the princess sat, and she stood to bestow his prize. Harry slowly walked
forward, none too eager yet neither reluctant. Though he was fifteen and she
seventeen, they stood the same height. For a moment neither budged, Heloise
staring with her blank blue eyes.
King Brandon turned his gaze to the other
side as though he could not bear to look, and when Harry's eyes met with Roldan's he received a nod of encouragement. Sunlight reflected off her platinum
blonde hair, the jewels in her tiara glistening like the ocean on a summer
night. When Harry did not move for several moments, the citizens began to
snicker and the princess glanced nervously from side to side as if to say “get
on with it!” Harold took a step forward, then instead of lifting his lips to
hers he quickly took her hand in his and kissed the back of her palm. As he
stormed through the crowd people shouted, “You’re not supposed to kiss her like
that boy!” However Heloise did not
seem ungrateful. Surprised yes, but she received this gracious alterative with
secret joy. Ignoring the questions of his sister and mother the prince mounted
his horse, and gave his father one last withering glare before riding on.
4 comments :
Your description was really good during the fight scene. And I enjoyed reading from Harry's perspective. This is really exciting, and I can't wait to read more!
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Though I think you could play up Harry's emotions when he sees Lyle. (I did like the part about him wanting to vomit. That was humorous and effective at the same time.)
Also, since this is more old-fashioned, you might consider replacing the words "Kid" and "awkward". I'm not sure what you could substitute for Kid, but instead of awkward, you might write "uncomfortable". Or you could sift through the dictionary. That's always fun :)
can't wait to read more!!
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I have nothing to say about this chapter, other than I loved the action! :D I love sword fights and fencing and any other type of medieval duel. I also love the poetry at the beginning of your chapters.
ReplyDeleteThank you! I don't have poetry for every chapter, only when I'm really introducing a character. But I'm glad you like it!
ReplyDeleteYour description was really good during the fight scene. And I enjoyed reading from Harry's perspective. This is really exciting, and I can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteThough I think you could play up Harry's emotions when he sees Lyle. (I did like the part about him wanting to vomit. That was humorous and effective at the same time.)
Also, since this is more old-fashioned, you might consider replacing the words "Kid" and "awkward". I'm not sure what you could substitute for Kid, but instead of awkward, you might write "uncomfortable". Or you could sift through the dictionary. That's always fun :)
can't wait to read more!!
Those are great tips! I really appreciate the feedback :)
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